Task #1 - 1
The question:
Agree/Disagree: "Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Technology has made our lives easier?"
My Answer:
For me who the ones who stay in front of laptop 8 hours a day, obviously I would say that technology made our lives much more easier than ever. it because nowadays the computing power much more faster than before, I can do my task through my laptop much more easier and faster. for example in the last maybe in the past 15 years I doing calculation using spreadsheet it took 30 seconds to complete but now only one second maybe less than that I can complete or finish my task. That's why I think technology mad our life much more easier
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 4
The response provides a clear opinion on the topic and supports it with relevant examples.
Delivery: 3.5
The response is coherent and generally well-organized. The ideas are presented logically, although there are some minor instances of repetition and run-on sentences.
Language Use: 3
The language used is generally appropriate and demonstrates a good command of vocabulary. However, there are a few errors in grammar, punctuation, and word choice that slightly impact the clarity and precision of the response.
Topic Development: 3.5
The response adequately develops the main idea by providing a personal perspective and supporting it with an example. However, there could be more elaboration and additional examples to further strengthen the argument.
Overall, the response demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and effectively supports the opinion, but there is room for improvement in language use and topic development.
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Task #1 - 2
The question:
Explain a Choice: "Describe a hobby or activity you enjoy in your free time and explain why you find it interesting."
My Answer:
I said the activity that I enjoyed the most in my free time is playing soccer with my son. because it's really make me happy and of course it should make my son happy we play soccer together I train him how to kick correctly and day by day he become more motivated to play soccer. we've seen that at the first my son not really enjoyed to play soccer because he feared about getting hit with the ball but right now he much more confident with the ball I really proud of him. that's why playing soccer with my son should be my enjoyable free time
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear description of the hobby/activity (playing soccer with the son) and its impact on the individual. The reader understands that the activity brings happiness to both the individual and their son, and that they actively engage in training and motivating the son to play soccer.
Delivery: 3 - The response effectively communicates the information with a clear and coherent structure. The writer conveys their thoughts and experiences in a logical manner, using appropriate transitions to connect ideas.
Language Use: 3 - The language used is generally clear and precise. The writer demonstrates a good command of vocabulary and uses varied sentence structures. There are a few minor errors, but they do not hinder comprehension or communication.
Topic Development: 3 - The writer provides adequate support for their viewpoint by sharing personal experiences and observations. They explain how their son's initial fear of getting hit with the ball transformed into confidence over time. The response could have further developed the topic by discussing specific skills or strategies they teach their son during their soccer sessions.
Overall Score: 3
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Task #1 - 3
The question:
Agree/Disagree: "Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to live in a big city than in a rural area?"
My Answer:
Rural area is the best option for me by now. just because I can done my all my tasks or remotely I no need to commute or to go to office to finish my job I thought and also my meetings. and also living in rural area make you more sociable and it less stressed and in Big City. for example I can help the meeting with my team easier or no need to do driving a car or using commuter line and Etc it's really cheap and also I can continue my life after the meeting enjoyable because the fresh air because I live with my family and very friendly neighbor and someone. that's why I think living in rural area is the best option rather than living in a big city
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear stance on the topic and explains the reasons for the preference for living in a rural area over a big city. The response also highlights the advantages of rural living such as the ability to work remotely, less stress, and a sense of community.
Delivery: 3 - The response is coherent and organized, presenting the ideas in a logical manner. The ideas are supported with examples and the response is easy to follow.
Language Use: 3 - The language used is generally clear and effective. There are a few minor errors and awkward phrases, but they do not hinder comprehension.
Topic Development: 3 - The response demonstrates a good level of development by providing reasons and examples to support the preference for living in a rural area. The advantages of rural living are discussed, including remote work opportunities, reduced commuting, and a better quality of life.
Overall, the response is well-structured and effectively communicates the preference for living in a rural area. It provides clear reasoning and supporting details. The language use is generally effective, despite some minor errors.
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
Explain a Choice: "Describe a memorable trip you have taken and explain why it was significant to you."
My Answer:
I'd say the most memorable trip I have done in the past is when I went to the beach with my family not really fancy beach I think it's really cheap and not not so clean Beach but I found my children really fun of it they made a place or something like build a sand from it and very very have fun with it. when I saw that moment that make me happy very very happy seeing my son laughing.So the thing is not the place itself but how we spend our time and importantly how my children feel happy or not about it that's my memorable trip I had
ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (General Description, Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):
General Description: 3 - The response provides a clear description of a memorable trip to a beach with the family. It mentions the beach not being fancy or clean, but highlights the enjoyment and fun experienced by the children. The significance of the trip is briefly explained.
Delivery: 2 - The response is somewhat disorganized and lacks a clear structure. The ideas are presented in a fragmented manner, making it difficult to follow the narrative. However, the main points are conveyed adequately.
Language Use: 2 - The language used is generally understandable, but there are some errors and awkward phrasing throughout the response. The vocabulary is limited, and there is a lack of variety in sentence structures. Some sentences are unclear or confusing.
Topic Development: 2 - The response addresses the prompt but lacks depth and detail. The significance of the trip is briefly mentioned, but there is limited elaboration on why it was memorable. The focus is primarily on the children's enjoyment, without providing much personal reflection or insight. The response could benefit from more specific examples or anecdotes to support the ideas.
Overall, the response provides a basic description of a memorable trip, but it lacks organization, clarity, and depth. It would benefit from more coherent structure, improved language use, and more detailed explanations to fully address the prompt.
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Task #1 - 5
The question:
Agree/Disagree: "Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is important for students to take part in extracurricular activities?"
My Answer:
Of course I agree that students should take extra curricular activities outside classes,. because not every learning steps can be found in classes because, for example leadership, yes maybe the teacher will accommodate how to do a teamwork but that's in circumstances that the teacher watching it, but in the real life extracurricular activities maybe can present near real life leadership actions. that's one of many reasons why exactly is so important for students so I think once again extracurricular activities important for students
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