Task #1 - 1
The question:
Discuss your favorite movie and explain why it is special to you.
My Answer:
Obviously my favorite movie is the Avenger from the Marvel universe or Marvel studio. a simple because I really love the animation I really love the CGI they made that's really cool I couldn't imagine how come they created it how many resources they spend on it that's really cool I think. and the second one because the story is really cool and it seems that I believe in somehow their story is real is on this world but if you see it's not that's really amaze me every time I remembering the movie. it's really surprised that human can make that kind of film
ChatGPT Asessment:
Assessment of Answer Transcript:
General Description: 2/4
The answer provides a general description of the favorite movie, mentioning "The Avengers" from the Marvel universe.
The description lacks specific details or examples about the movie and its significance.
Delivery: 2/4
The delivery is somewhat hesitant and lacks fluency.
There are frequent pauses and repetitions that disrupt the flow of the response.
The speaker's tone and enthusiasm about the movie are evident, but the delivery could be improved for better clarity and coherence.
Language Use: 2/4
The language use is somewhat limited, with simple sentences and a lack of variety in vocabulary and grammar.
Some errors and awkward phrases are present, such as "a simple because" and "it seems that I believe in somehow their story is real is on this world."
Topic Development: 2/4
The topic development is limited.
The response mentions two points: the animation and CGI of the movie and the coolness of the story.
However, there is no elaboration or supporting details provided for these points, and the speaker does not explain why the movie is special to them beyond being amazed by the animation and story.
Total Score: 8/16
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Task #1 - 2
The question:
Describe a childhood toy that holds sentimental value and explain why it is significant to you.
My Answer:
I do remember when I first time have console game the name is Sega it's the first time I play console game in my life my mom brought it to me from her friends on that day I'm really happy having that item. this is not really sophisticated console game like nowadays but I really love to play with it especially for playing soccer because in real life as a childhood I done soccer play a lot that I really love it. and then the second games that I played on that console game is the Sonic the Hedgehog you know the men alike Hedgehog that can run really fast it's really for me
ChatGPT Asessment:
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Task #1 - 3
The question:
Talk about a historical event that you find interesting and explain why it captured your attention.
My Answer:
I will say history that astonishing me is how people can find microchip. it just simply because now I'm reading a book called the innovator from from really notable right there I forgot the name that's wrote about Steve Jobs that he was wrote about Elon Musk and and some Renaissance person such as Leonard the deficiency. now I'm reading about this transistor of invention or that leads to microchip invention and nowadays microchip is really important for our life we can find it everywhere from the phone laptop your iPod it contains really massive microchip compared to those day. this Monumental for human being because by microchip we can compute our digital really fast and really cheap
ChatGPT Asessment:
Here is an assessment of your answer based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description:
The general description refers to the overall understanding and development of the topic. In your response, you provided a brief overview of the historical event you find interesting, which is the invention of the microchip. You mentioned that you came across this information while reading a book about innovators like Steve Jobs, Elon Musk, and Renaissance figures such as Leonardo da Vinci. You also highlighted the significance of microchips in today's world. Your general description is somewhat clear, but it lacks coherence and organization.
Score: 2
Delivery:
Delivery assesses the clarity and fluency of your speech. In your answer, there are some instances of hesitations, repetitions, and fragmented sentences. For example, you said, "it just simply because now I'm reading a book called the innovator from from really notable right there I forgot the name." Additionally, you seemed to struggle with finding the right words at times, such as "Leonard the deficiency" instead of "Leonardo da Vinci." While your delivery is somewhat understandable, it could be improved to enhance clarity and fluency.
Score: 2
Language Use:
Language Use evaluates your ability to use appropriate vocabulary and grammar structures. In your response, there are several instances of incorrect word choices and grammar errors. For example, "astonishing me" should be "amazing me," "that's wrote" should be "that's written," "leads to microchip invention" should be "led to the invention of the microchip," and "this Monumental" should be "this is monumental." These errors hinder the overall effectiveness of your language use.
Score: 1
Topic Development:
Topic Development assesses the depth and coherence of your ideas. While you briefly touched upon the historical event of the microchip invention and its significance, your ideas lack development and cohesiveness. The response seems somewhat disorganized and lacks specific examples or details to support your points. It would be beneficial to provide more context and elaborate on why the microchip invention captured your attention.
Score: 2
Overall, the score for your TOEFL iBT speaking practice would be:
General Description: 2
Delivery: 2
Language Use: 1
Topic Development: 2
Total Score: 7 (out of 16)
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
Share your experience of participating in a team sport and explain how it has influenced your life.
My Answer:
I love soccer or obviously it called football for General but in US it more known as soccer than football. I joining a team from my undergrad University and we are still playing even if we are now graduate already and for example tomorrow I plan to play soccer with my friends even if the court is really far away from my house I am still planning to go there. please how I really love this game this time is not important for us so even if it's far away from our houses we work on it because we love it. even if the the game may be only last for 2 hours for me myself maybe I just play for 40 to 45 minutes and the trip to take to that court maybe oh 60 minutes so you can imagine how painful this one if is not a hobby
ChatGPT Asessment:
General Description (3/4): Your response provides a general description of your experience participating in a team sport, specifically soccer. You mention that you joined a team in your undergrad University and continue to play even after graduating. You also express your love for the game and your willingness to travel long distances to play. However, the response lacks specific details about how participating in the sport has influenced your life.
Delivery (2/4): While your speech is generally understandable, there are some issues with clarity and coherence. There are several instances of incomplete sentences and unclear phrasing, such as "for example tomorrow I plan to play soccer with my friends even if the court is really far away from my house I am still planning to go there." This sentence could be better structured for clarity. Additionally, there are some repetitions and redundant phrases that could be eliminated to improve the overall delivery.
Language Use (2/4): Your language use is somewhat problematic. There are several grammatical errors, such as the use of "joining" instead of "joined" and "even if the the game" instead of "even if the game." There are also some word choice issues and inaccuracies, such as "for General but in US it more known as soccer than football." This sentence is unclear and could be improved. Additionally, there is a lack of variety in sentence structures, which affects the overall language use.
Topic Development (2/4): While you provide some information about your experience playing soccer and your dedication to the sport, the response lacks depth and development. There is minimal elaboration on how playing a team sport has influenced your life beyond expressing your love for the game. More specific examples or personal anecdotes could have been included to strengthen the topic development.
Total Score: 9/16
Please note that the assessment is based on the given transcript and the provided TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics. It's important to practice and improve on the areas that need development, such as delivery, language use, and topic development, to achieve a higher score.
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Task #1 - 5
The question:
Discuss a memorable birthday celebration you had and explain why it stands out in your memory.
My Answer:
Actually I don't celebrate birthday awesomely especially since I aged maybe 17 until now I never celebrate my birthday or maybe after 14 or 13 I don't remember exactly. but I was celebrate the birthday that really stick on my mind when I was about 4 years old and my kindergarten I do remember on that day my mom about a cake for me and she left from or she take leave for a day from her office just for me bringing the cake in front of my class in front of my teacher and they calling my name that's what I remember. actually not the celebrate party that stick on my mind but how my mom gave effort on it and even if I'm still really young I'm a little kid I knew that my mom's job is not really satisfying our family is struggling to get better income actually through my mom
ChatGPT Asessment:
General Description: 3
Your response provides a general description of a memorable birthday celebration from your childhood. You explain that you don't typically celebrate birthdays now, but you do remember one specific celebration when you were around 4 years old and in kindergarten. You mention that your mother brought a cake to your class and took the day off work for you. You also mention that your family was struggling financially.
Delivery: 3
Your delivery is generally clear and understandable. You speak at a moderate pace and use appropriate intonation. However, there are some instances of repetition and hesitations in your speech ("actually," "you know," "um," etc.), which slightly affect the fluency of your response.
Language Use: 2
Your language use is somewhat limited, with occasional errors and some repetition. You tend to use simple sentence structures and vocabulary. There are also instances where your sentences are not fully developed, and you rely on filler words and phrases. Improving the complexity of your sentences and expanding your vocabulary would enhance your language use.
Topic Development: 3
You provide some details about the birthday celebration, such as your age, being in kindergarten, and your mother bringing a cake to your class. However, you focus more on emphasizing your mother's efforts and the financial struggles of your family rather than describing the celebration itself. While it's good to share personal insights, providing more specific and vivid descriptions of the celebration would improve your topic development.
Total score: 11 out of 16
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Task #1 - 6
The question:
Share your opinion on whether it is better to live in a small town or a big city. Provide reasons to support your preference.
My Answer:
As a businessman that have Team working from home and work remotely I Do privately leaving in small cities instead of a big cities. because I can manage my team even if I don't in the office we can do a meeting even if I'm so far away from the office but of course I have to attend some meeting for physically because physically means more socialize the communication will be a held better than online meeting. however maybe it's because just my children not on school age because if I'm leaving in rural City or small City and my children have go to school maybe I couldn't afford better education for them so maybe in the next 5 years my opinion will be different because I'm reaching the best education for my children which are supposed to be on the big city
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description:
The response provides a clear opinion on the topic and offers some reasons to support the preference. However, the response lacks organization and coherence, making it difficult to follow at times. There is also some repetition and unnecessary information included.
Score: 2
Delivery:
The delivery of the response is somewhat informal and lacks fluency. There are some grammar errors, and the speech could benefit from smoother transitions between ideas. The pronunciation is generally understandable, but there are some areas where clarity could be improved.
Score: 2
Language Use:
The language use in the response is adequate, but there are noticeable grammar errors throughout. Some sentences are unclear or awkwardly constructed, and there are instances of incorrect word choice. The vocabulary range is limited, and there is a need for more varied and precise language.
Score: 2
Topic Development:
The response addresses the topic and provides reasons to support the preference. However, the ideas are not well-developed or elaborated upon. There is a lack of specific examples or evidence to support the points made. The response also introduces unrelated information about the speaker's children and their education, which is not directly relevant to the topic.
Score: 2
Total Score: 2 + 2 + 2 + 2 = 8/16
The overall score for this response is 8 out of 16. The response demonstrates some understanding of the topic and attempts to provide reasons to support the preference. However, there are significant issues with organization, coherence, grammar, and language use, which impact the overall effectiveness of the response. To improve, focus on structuring the response more effectively, using clearer language, and providing specific examples or evidence to support the points made. Additionally, practice delivering the response with greater fluency and pronunciation clarity.
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Task #1 - 7
The question:
Express your views on whether schools should prioritize arts education or focus more on STEM subjects. Explain your opinion with supporting arguments.
My Answer:
I believe School nowadays shows more focus on steem or science technology engineering and Mathematics because now people must be keep up with the technology. the technology growing really fast that never thing before that maybe you never thought before that this technology growing so fast also the best of this technology making our life really fast and maybe someday our people could be replaced by machine or artificial intelligence we don't know. but however I do believe are still held on school but maybe just option for students students who wants the Arts subject could take it if not no problem and I I emphasize that learning team or stem it's really important for our next generation
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description:
In terms of the general description, you provided a clear opinion on the topic and attempted to explain your viewpoint. However, your response lacks coherence and organization. You should work on structuring your answer more effectively to improve clarity. Score: 2/4
Delivery:
Your delivery is generally understandable, but there are some issues with fluency and pronunciation. You have a tendency to rush your speech and stumble over some words, which can make it difficult for the listener to follow your ideas. Additionally, your intonation and stress patterns could be improved to enhance your overall delivery. Score: 2/4
Language Use:
While your response includes some relevant vocabulary related to the topic, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect the clarity of your message. You should strive for more accurate and precise language use to convey your ideas effectively. Score: 2/4
Topic Development:
Although you attempted to provide supporting arguments, your response lacks sufficient development and coherence. The ideas are presented in a fragmented manner, and you could benefit from providing more specific examples or elaborating on your points. Additionally, it would be helpful to explore counterarguments and address them in your response. Score: 2/4
Total Score: 2 + 2 + 2 + 2 = 8/16
Please note that this assessment is based on the provided transcript and an approximation of the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics. Keep in mind that actual TOEFL iBT scoring involves multiple raters, and the assessment provided here is just an estimation.
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Task #1 - 8
The question:
Discuss your stance on whether social media has a positive or negative impact on society. Provide examples and reasons to support your viewpoint.
My Answer:
From my point of view as a businessman I do believe that social media give us more positive impact than the negatives. I simply as because true social media I couldn't do campaign a lot easier than before much cheaper than before that really help growth my business. for tomorrow and the other hand on out of context of business I do believe social media nowadays connect people all over the world maybe friends and family that separated away for a long time they can meet each other through social media despite of distance and time. Thus even if some people say that social media also have negative impact I do believe the positives outweight very much the negatives
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description (4/4):
The speaker clearly states their stance on whether social media has a positive or negative impact on society.
The speaker provides reasons to support their viewpoint, mentioning benefits for business growth and connecting people.
Delivery (4/4):
The speaker demonstrates a good command of spoken English, with clear pronunciation and appropriate intonation.
The pace of speech is natural and easy to follow.
There are no significant issues with fluency or coherence.
Language Use (3/4):
The speaker uses a range of vocabulary appropriate to the topic, such as "campaign," "separated," and "outweigh."
There are minor errors in grammar and word choice, such as "I do believe the positives outweight very much the negatives" (should be "outweigh" instead of "outweight" and "outweigh the negatives" instead of "outweigh very much the negatives").
Topic Development (4/4):
The speaker provides examples and reasons to support their viewpoint.
The examples given are relevant and illustrate the positive impact of social media on business growth and personal connections.
The response is well-organized, with clear introduction, supporting points, and conclusion.
Total Score: 15/16
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Task #1 - 9
The question:
Express your opinion on whether it is better to travel alone or with a companion. Explain the advantages and disadvantages of each option.
My Answer:
Travel alone always the best option for me. firstly because I do love getting lost on somewhere that I don't recognize the place maybe I don't recognize the language because it's really challenged me how to solve my problem how to maintain the social and it's once again it's really challenged me. and secondly I've done several vacation with groups with my friends I've seen that people make the team as a burden for example if one people got sick of course as a team we have to support each other so our vacation not really optimized because we have to wait for him because of his sick we have to take care of him will not really good for me if happened that way
ChatGPT Asessment:
General Description: 3/4
Your response generally addresses the topic by expressing your opinion on whether it is better to travel alone or with a companion. You provide some reasons to support your opinion and mention personal experiences. However, your response lacks depth and could benefit from more specific examples and elaboration.
Delivery: 2/4
Your delivery could be improved. There are some instances of repetition, hesitation, and unclear phrasing, which affect the overall clarity of your response. Additionally, you speak at a relatively fast pace, making it difficult for the listener to fully comprehend your ideas.
Language Use: 2/4
Your language use is somewhat limited, with some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "Travel alone always the best option for me" should be "Traveling alone is always the best option for me." You also repeat certain words and phrases excessively. It would be beneficial to vary your vocabulary and sentence structures to enhance your language use.
Topic Development: 2/4
While you touch on some advantages of traveling alone (e.g., the challenge and problem-solving aspect) and mention a disadvantage of traveling with a group (waiting for a sick member), your response lacks detailed examples and sufficient development of ideas. You could have provided more specific instances or personal anecdotes to support your points and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the topic.
Total Score: 9/16
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Task #1 - 10
The question:
Share your thoughts on whether it is important for children to learn a second language. Provide reasons to support your opinion.
My Answer:
Considering the technology nowadays I do believe children the the youngest generation today not really important to learn a new language or second language. because I believe someday maybe 10 or 15 years later language will not be obstacle for our social life. we can communicate to each other even if I talk with China language maybe and on the other side of the world they can listen real time no need a translator only a device to Translate from Chinese to English. I've seen that kind of device right now but I felt that those kind of device not really convenience by now but I do believe once again 10 or 15 years later it should be much different. however if the children of the future maybe as a diplomat or some formal International Job it of course important to learn second language. but the thing is the question is about the children right now so in my own opinion children right now no need to learn second language it is much more important to learn how to build creativity teamwork encourage them to maintain their curiosity
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description: 3
The response provides a general description of the topic, discussing the relevance of learning a second language in the context of current technology. The answer acknowledges the potential for language barriers to be overcome through advancements in translation devices. However, it also acknowledges the importance of learning a second language for future diplomatic or international job roles.
Delivery: 3
The delivery of the response is generally clear, although there are a few instances of incomplete sentences or grammatical errors. The speaker maintains a steady pace and conveys their thoughts with reasonable coherence.
Language Use: 2
While the response demonstrates some understanding and use of English language structures, there are several grammatical errors, such as missing articles ("the") and subject-verb agreement issues ("children the the youngest generation"). Additionally, there are some inaccuracies in word choice and vocabulary usage, which could affect the overall clarity of the message.
Topic Development: 3
The response provides some relevant reasons to support the opinion. It discusses the potential future advancements in technology and translation devices, suggesting that learning a second language may become less important. It also acknowledges the importance of learning a second language for certain future professions. However, the response deviates slightly from the question by emphasizing the importance of building creativity, teamwork, and maintaining curiosity in children, which is not directly related to the topic.
Total Score: 11 out of 16
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