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TOEFL IBT Writing Answering Practice #4

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

A mother is more essential to a child’s upbringing than a father. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


For me, absolutely yes. I think mother is more important to upbringing children than their father.

Firstly, I have 2 sons, I have high considerable regarding this topic. I've tried to play with my sons all day long, but I couldn't. I've tried to take care of my two sons, when their mother got sick... It cost me a lot, it made me uncomfortable. It doesn't mean I don't love my sons. But I don't have the patient to take care my sons all day long. My thought was gone everywhere, I can't focus to take care of my two sons, thus I were easily to lost my temper to my sons. Of course I totally understood that children are not subjected to anger from their parents, they have their own world. I just can't.

Secondly, my sons need their mother than me. My sons can easily share happiness with me. But for sadness, they always look for their mom. It is so difficult for me to calming down them when they got falling of from their bike, when they lost their toys, etc. They first choice to loosen their sadness is their mom, not me.

So, that are the facts that I faced daily, I am totally agree that mother is so important for children's growth mentally and physically. By the way, as per I write this post, my sons are 5 y.o. and 3 y.o.

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