Task #1 - 1
The question:
Talk about a memorable vacation you have taken.
My Answer:
I’d say the most memorable vacation that I have taken in the past is was when I gone to the beach with my children not really fancy a beach it's just ordinary Beach we are entering where we are really common beach and and it makes my it made my children happy because they building something with the sand and they're really happy on it and when I saw my children really happy of course as a father I've became very happy also. that's the most memorable vacation that I have taken
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript assessment breakdown based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description: 3/4
The response provides a general description of the most memorable vacation, mentioning going to an ordinary beach with the speaker's children and their enjoyment of building sand structures. However, the description lacks specific details or vivid imagery that could enhance the overall understanding of the experience.
Delivery: 3/4
The delivery of the response is generally clear and understandable. The speaker maintains a relatively steady pace, and although there are a few instances of repetition and hesitation ("and," "they're"), they do not significantly impede comprehension. However, the response lacks variation in intonation and could benefit from more expressive delivery to engage the listener.
Language Use: 2/4
While the response demonstrates some basic language use, there are notable errors and limitations. The speaker struggles with subject-verb agreement ("when I gone," "it makes my"), tense consistency ("it made my children happy," "they building"), and prepositions ("when I saw my children really happy of course as a father I've became very happy also"). Additionally, there is a lack of complex sentence structures or advanced vocabulary, resulting in a somewhat repetitive and simplistic use of language.
Topic Development: 2/4
The response partially addresses the topic by briefly describing the most memorable vacation, emphasizing the happiness of the speaker's children and their sand-building activities. However, the response lacks depth and elaboration. It would benefit from additional details such as the location, duration, or specific activities that made the vacation memorable. The development of the topic is limited, and there is missed potential for engaging storytelling or personal anecdotes.
Total Score: 10/16
The overall score for the response is 10 out of 16. While there is a general description of the vacation and a clear delivery, there are notable language use errors and a lack of developed topic discussion. To improve, focus on improving grammar and sentence structure, expanding vocabulary, and providing more specific details and elaboration in your responses.
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Task #1 - 2
The question:
Describe a special family tradition you have.
My Answer:
As a Muslim we have tradition to meet each other when we do the eighth Mubarak it is our big day or after we fasting for 30 days and then we meet each other or families especially closest families gather together usually and parents house. and then why this is special for us because not only because our faith but also we really met with our family maybe once you're on these days. that's my family tradition that special for me
ChatGPT Asessment:
Here's the assessment of your answer based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description:
Your response provides a general description of a special family tradition. You mention the eighth Mubarak, fasting for 30 days, and gathering with close family members at your parents' house. However, your description lacks specific details about the tradition itself and its significance. You could have provided more information to paint a clearer picture of the tradition. Score: 3/4
Delivery:
Your delivery is generally clear and understandable. Your speech flows smoothly, and you maintain a consistent pace. However, there are a few instances of hesitation and lack of fluency, such as "or after we fasting" and "maybe once you're on these days." Additionally, you could have varied your tone and intonation to make your response more engaging. Score: 3/4
Language Use:
Your language use is fairly accurate, and you effectively convey your ideas. You demonstrate a basic command of vocabulary and grammar, but there are a few errors and instances of awkward phrasing. For example, "when we do the eighth Mubarak" could be better phrased as "when we celebrate the eighth Mubarak." Additionally, "maybe once you're on these days" should be rephrased as "maybe only once during these days." Score: 3/4
Topic Development:
You touch upon the main points of the topic by describing the tradition of gathering with close family members after fasting for 30 days. However, your response lacks sufficient development and elaboration. You could have provided more specific examples or anecdotes to illustrate the significance of this tradition in your family. Score: 2/4
Total Score:
General Description: 3/4
Delivery: 3/4
Language Use: 3/4
Topic Development: 2/4
The total score for your answer is 11/16.
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Task #1 - 3
The question:
Discuss your favorite hobby or leisure activity.
My Answer:
I'd say my favorite hobby is playing soccer. at simple because I love soccer since I was scared and I'm still playing it with my friends on the weekend. sometimes it's called Sunday leak because we are not very provisional we just playing around and not really good on the beach. I do remember when I was a kid I count every goals that I scored on the beach every games that not so common for kids that day. However right now I'm not as good as when I was a kid but I Still Loving to play soccer a lot. that's my favorite hobby until now
ChatGPT Asessment:
Assessment of your TOEFL iBT speaking practice:
General Description: 3
You provided a clear description of your favorite hobby, which is playing soccer.
You mentioned that you have loved soccer since you were young and still play it with your friends on weekends.
You described a common activity you engage in, called the "Sunday leak," where you play casually and have fun.
You talked about how you used to count every goal you scored as a kid, which shows your enthusiasm for the hobby.
Overall, your response effectively conveyed your favorite hobby and provided some personal details.
Delivery: 3
Your speech was fairly fluent and coherent, with a few minor hesitations and pauses.
Your pronunciation was generally clear, although there were a few instances where some words were not pronounced accurately.
Your pacing was appropriate, and you maintained a conversational tone throughout.
You showed some variation in tone and expression, but there could have been more emphasis on certain points to make your speech more engaging.
Language Use: 2
You demonstrated basic language skills, using mostly accurate grammar and vocabulary.
There were some errors in verb tense usage, such as saying "since I was scared" instead of "since I was a child."
You made a mistake by saying "Sunday leak" instead of "Sunday league."
There were a few instances of word choice errors, such as using "provisional" instead of "professional" and "on the beach" instead of "in the league."
Overall, while your language use was sufficient to convey your message, there were noticeable errors that affected clarity and accuracy.
Topic Development: 3
You provided some details about your favorite hobby, including your childhood memories of counting goals and your current enjoyment of playing soccer.
However, you could have expanded further on why you love soccer, what specific skills or aspects of the game you enjoy, and any challenges or achievements you have experienced.
More specific examples or anecdotes could have been included to enhance the development of your response.
Total Score: 11 out of 16
Please note that this assessment is based on the provided transcript and without considering other aspects, such as intonation and body language, which are also evaluated in the TOEFL iBT speaking section. Additionally, the scoring may vary depending on the specific rubrics used by the official TOEFL iBT examiners.
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Task #1 - 4
The question:
Talk about a person who has had a significant influence on your life.
My Answer:
The most influence people that has significant influence on me I will say is my mom. obviously every people in the world should say their mom has influence on their life. for me especially I got my mom push me harder and harder to make me get into the best university in Indonesia and actually I did it and thanks to my mom because she relentlessly pushed me on that day. so my mom is the most significant influence on my life because her eager
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description:
The speaker addresses the question prompt and talks about a person who has had a significant influence on their life. The response is coherent and focuses on the speaker's mother as the influential person. However, the description lacks specific details and supporting examples to illustrate the influence. There is also some repetition and unnecessary statements in the response. Overall, the general description is acceptable but could be improved.
Score: 2 out of 4
Delivery:
The delivery of the response is somewhat informal and lacks fluency. There are some instances of hesitations, pauses, and grammatical errors. The speaker's tone is generally clear, but there could be more variation in voice and intonation to make the speech more engaging. Additionally, the response lacks emphasis on key points, resulting in a somewhat monotonous delivery.
Score: 2 out of 4
Language Use:
The language use in the response is generally adequate. The speaker demonstrates some understanding of grammar and vocabulary, but there are several errors and inaccuracies. For example, there are sentence fragments, missing articles, and incorrect verb tenses. The response also includes some repetitive phrases. More varied vocabulary and sentence structures would enhance the language use.
Score: 2 out of 4
Topic Development:
The topic development is limited in the response. The speaker briefly mentions the influence of their mother in pushing them to enter the best university in Indonesia, but there is a lack of specific details and examples to support this claim. The response does not elaborate on how this influence has shaped the speaker's life or provide further insights into the relationship with their mother. A more comprehensive discussion with relevant examples would improve the topic development.
Score: 2 out of 4
Total Score:
2 + 2 + 2 + 2 = 8 out of 16
Overall, the response demonstrates some understanding of the question and provides a basic description of the influential person. However, there is room for improvement in terms of delivery, language use, and topic development. The response could be more engaging, grammatically accurate, and detailed.
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Task #1 - 5
The question:
Describe a memorable celebration or party you have attended.
My Answer:
I don't go to party too often but if I had to choose which memorable party in the past on my life I choose the undergrad celebration of me. it's not a fancy party I just go with my family eating around or on restaurant or coffees I don't remember exactly but the thing is we gather together because of that's a big day for me I graduate from good University in my country it's make me proud also my parents proud. that's my memorable celebration party that I had in the past
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description (3/4):
Your response provides a general description of the memorable celebration or party you attended. You mention that it was your undergraduate celebration and that it was not a fancy party. You also mention that you went to a restaurant or coffee shop with your family to celebrate your graduation from a good university in your country. Overall, your response adequately addresses the general description of the celebration.
Delivery (2/4):
In terms of delivery, your response is somewhat lacking. You speak in a somewhat hesitant manner and there are instances where your sentences are fragmented. Additionally, your tone and intonation could be improved to make your speech more engaging and confident. It would be beneficial to work on your fluency and delivery to enhance your overall speaking performance.
Language Use (2/4):
Your language use is satisfactory, but there are areas for improvement. While you generally express your ideas clearly, there are some grammatical errors and inconsistencies in your response. For example, there are instances where you switch tenses (e.g., "I choose" instead of "I chose") and there are missing articles (e.g., "the undergrad celebration of me" instead of "my undergraduate celebration"). Additionally, you repeat certain phrases (e.g., "make me proud" and "my parents proud") without providing further elaboration or using varied vocabulary. Working on your grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure will help you improve your language use.
Topic Development (2/4):
In terms of topic development, your response lacks sufficient details and elaboration. Although you mention that it was a big day for you and that you felt proud, you do not provide specific examples or anecdotes about the celebration itself. Providing more specific information about the atmosphere, activities, or interactions during the party would have improved your response in terms of topic development.
Total Score: 9/16
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Task #2 - 1
The question:
Express your opinion on whether students should be required to wear uniforms in schools.
My Answer:
I believe student should wear uniform every day go to the schools. as simple as because first one your students wearing uniform they can focus on their study instead of choosing what they wear everyday. secondly it makes the good environment of social in students because it will prevent exclusivity in school because of economical status we know that rich students could afford better wardrobe that could be causal of social exclusivity. that's why I think students should wear uniform in school
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript assessment breakdown based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description:
Your response provides a clear opinion on the topic and offers two supporting points. You briefly explain the reasons behind your opinion. However, you could have provided more specific examples or evidence to support your points. Additionally, your response lacks a clear introduction and conclusion. Overall, your general description is somewhat developed but could be improved.
Score: 3
Delivery:
Your delivery is generally fluent and coherent. You maintain a steady pace and your speech is mostly clear and understandable. However, there are a few instances of unclear pronunciation and some hesitation in your speech. You could also vary your tone and intonation to make your speech more engaging. Overall, your delivery is good but could be improved in terms of pronunciation and fluency.
Score: 3
Language Use:
Your use of language is generally effective in conveying your ideas. You demonstrate a satisfactory range of vocabulary and use some complex sentence structures. However, there are a few grammatical errors and instances of word choice that could be improved. You could also work on using more precise and academic language. Overall, your language use is adequate but could be further refined.
Score: 3
Topic Development:
You present two main points to support your opinion on students wearing uniforms. However, you provide limited elaboration or development of these points. You could have included specific examples or explanations to strengthen your arguments. Additionally, you could have addressed potential counterarguments or alternative perspectives. Overall, your topic development is somewhat limited and lacks depth.
Score: 2
Total Score:
General Description: 3
Delivery: 3
Language Use: 3
Topic Development: 2
Total Score: 11 out of 16
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Task #2 - 2
The question:
Share your opinion on the benefits and drawbacks of living in a big city.
My Answer:
Leaving in this big city of course has benefits and drawbacks. I've seen benefits in living in big city is the such as medical facilitate that's really close and then the education is really good it's compared to Rural cities. and then also it has a drawbacks if living on a big city for example it will be stressful for people the traffic and then the noisy and then the environment that's so stressful for people that not good for children especially. that's two of my opinion about benefits and drawbacks of living in a big city
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript assessment breakdown based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics:
General Description (Score: 3)
Your response provides a general description of the benefits and drawbacks of living in a big city.
You mention specific benefits like medical facilities and good education compared to rural areas.
You also mention drawbacks like stress, traffic, noise, and a stressful environment for children.
However, your response lacks specific examples or details to support your points, which would have enhanced the clarity and depth of your description.
Delivery (Score: 3)
Your delivery is generally clear and understandable.
You speak at a moderate pace and maintain a consistent rhythm.
There are some instances of hesitation and minor grammatical errors, but they do not significantly impede comprehension.
You could have improved the delivery by using more varied intonation and stress to emphasize important points and create a more engaging presentation.
Language Use (Score: 3)
Your language use is generally effective in conveying your ideas.
You demonstrate a sufficient vocabulary range, although there are some instances where word choice could have been more precise.
Grammar-wise, there are minor errors and inconsistencies, but they do not hinder overall comprehension.
You could have further improved by incorporating more complex sentence structures and transitions to enhance coherence and cohesion.
Topic Development (Score: 2)
Your response briefly covers both benefits and drawbacks of living in a big city.
However, your ideas lack elaboration and development.
You mention some general points without providing specific examples or supporting details.
A more thorough discussion of the benefits and drawbacks, along with relevant examples, would have strengthened your response.
Total Score: 11 out of 16
Overall, your response provides a basic understanding of the benefits and drawbacks of living in a big city. To improve your score, focus on providing specific examples and details to support your ideas, using more varied intonation to enhance delivery, and incorporating complex sentence structures and transitions for better cohesion.
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Task #2 - 3
The question:
Discuss your views on whether technology has made communication easier or more complicated.
My Answer:
I do believe that technology man I will communication much more easier even if technically we have to get used to to use it we have to read the manual or we have to adapt a little bit more to use the devices. but in general I do believe we never met this easier of communication than ever. for example we can connect each other all over the world despite geography and time for example I can connect to my friend on Europe or in us through the technology such as social media video conference and so on. so I do leave that communication is easier because of the Technology
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description:
Your response addresses the question and presents a clear opinion on whether technology has made communication easier or more complicated. You provide an introduction, supporting points, and a conclusion. However, your answer lacks depth and could benefit from further elaboration and examples.
Score: 3
Delivery:
Your delivery is generally clear, and you maintain a consistent pace throughout your response. However, there are a few instances of hesitations and repetitions ("we have to," "for example"). Additionally, your speech could be more fluent and natural.
Score: 2
Language Use:
Your language use demonstrates a basic level of proficiency. You use some appropriate vocabulary related to technology and communication. However, there are grammatical errors and issues with sentence structure throughout your response. You also use filler words ("man," "so on") and informal language ("get used to," "I do leave") that should be avoided in a formal test setting.
Score: 2
Topic Development:
You provide a clear opinion and support it with one example (connecting with friends all over the world). However, your explanation is brief, lacking specific details and further development. To improve, you could provide more examples or discuss potential drawbacks of technology in communication.
Score: 2
Total Score: 9 out of 16
Please note that this assessment is subjective and based on the provided transcript. The official TOEFL iBT speaking scores may vary and consider additional factors. Remember to practice and improve your language skills for the best performance in the actual exam.
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Task #2 - 4
The question:
Express your opinion on whether governments should invest more in space exploration or environmental conservation.
My Answer:
In my own perspective government should not spend more on space exploration they should spend more Environmental issues. because of my country is not rich government we are developed country I live in Indonesia that's nonsense for us if Government spends more or investing on space exploration. on the other hand environmental issue it's real about the global warming about the forest that keep reducing right now it should be the concentration of our government. I don't agree government should invest more in space exploration
ChatGPT Asessment:
Transcript Assessment:
General Description (3/4):
The response provides a clear opinion on the topic and presents a basic argument supporting the preference for investing in environmental conservation rather than space exploration. The speaker mentions the specific country they live in (Indonesia) to emphasize their point. However, the explanation lacks depth and could benefit from additional supporting details or examples.
Delivery (3/4):
The delivery of the response is generally clear and understandable. The speaker speaks at a moderate pace and uses appropriate intonation. However, there are a few instances of grammar errors and hesitations, which slightly affect the overall fluency of the response.
Language Use (2/4):
The language use in the response is somewhat limited. The speaker relies on basic vocabulary and sentence structures, with some errors in grammar and word choice. There are instances of repetition, and the response could benefit from more varied and precise language. Additionally, the use of the phrase "that's nonsense" might be considered too informal in an academic context.
Topic Development (2/4):
The response addresses both sides of the prompt but focuses more on the preference for investing in environmental conservation. However, the speaker lacks in-depth analysis and supporting details. The argumentation could be strengthened by providing specific examples or facts related to environmental issues or the impacts of space exploration.
Total Score: 10/16
Overall, the response demonstrates a basic understanding of the prompt and presents a clear opinion. However, the delivery and language use could be improved to enhance fluency and precision. Additionally, providing more developed arguments and supporting details would strengthen the topic development.
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Task #2 - 5
The question:
Share your opinion on whether it is better to study abroad or in your home country.
My Answer:
In my own opinion I do believe that study abroad is good for students or every man in the world. the thing is what education you want to study if you are undergrad I suggest you still on your home country because it's really affordable but if you are on graduate students you can try to find Studio move from your comfort zone and meet new people making a new connection and someone. those kind of thing just make your life easier in the future and of course it will open your opportunity of your job or whatever you are to be in the future
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