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TOEFL IBT Speaking Practice #63

 Track 33 Transcript:

Narrator

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Why or why not? Use details and examples to explain your answer. It is more important to study math or science than it is to study art or literature.


My speaking transcript:

I do believe study math and science is more important than art or literature.  esible as because right now rapid technology development all over the world regarding especially for a communication on Internet it's very fast the  developing.  and also it's really demanding jobs nowadays.  in my own experience I can see my friend that has a good understanding about math and science can easily get a job even if they don't understand about art and literature


ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

Delivery (2/4):

The speaker's delivery is moderately clear, with some minor issues. There are occasional hesitations and errors in pronunciation ("esible as" is unclear) which slightly impact understandability, although the main points can be deciphered. More practice and fluency in speech delivery will lead to improvement.


Language Use (2/4):

The speaker makes use of a range of vocabulary and a number of complex sentence structures, but with several errors in grammar, word choice, and usage. For instance, the phrase "the developing" is not grammatically sound. The message is generally understandable but the errors can be distracting at times. Improvement can be achieved by refining grammar and language use.


Topic Development (2/4):

The speaker attempts to support the statement about the importance of studying math and science with personal examples. However, the argument could be more coherent and persuasive. The development of ideas lacks depth and breadth as the speaker focuses on job availability without considering other potential benefits of studying math and science, or acknowledging the merits of art and literature. The speaker is advised to further develop their points and provide more well-rounded, nuanced arguments.




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Track 34 Transcript:

Narrator

The university has announced a new policy regarding dining services. Read an article about it in the student newspaper. You have 50 seconds to read the article. Begin reading now.


Reading Passage:

Starting this year, the university dining hall will be transformed into The 

Campus Dining Club for one week at the end of each semester. During the last 

week of each semester, the dining hall will feature special meals prepared by 

the university’s culinary arts students. The school feels that this will give students who are studying cooking and food preparation valuable experience that 

will help them later, when they pursue careers. The university has announced 

that it will charge a small additional fee for these dinners in order to pay for the 

special gourmet food ingredients that will be required



Track 35 Transcript:

Narrator

Now listen to two students discussing the article.

Female student

Did you see that article?

Male student

Yeah—and it sounds like a great idea. It’s really good for the students in that program.

Female student

Don’t they cook in class anyway?

Male student

Well, yeah, they do . . . but my cousin was in the program a few years ago, and she said that it’s very different to cook for a lot of people in that kind of atmosphere than to cook for classmates.

Female student

Why is that?

Male student

Well, in class you can take your time. But, cooking for more people, there’s more pressure—I mean, you’re in a rush, people are waiting . . . and it might be easy to make a mistake with all that stress . . .

Female student

Then they’ll think you’re a bad chef, right?

Male student

Absolutely!

Female student

So, OK, it’s good practice. But what about the extra cost?

Male student

Well, look at it this way. You’ve eaten at some of the fancier restaurants in town, right?

Female student

Yeah, there are some great places to eat around here.

Male student

Well, these students . . . they’ll be making fantastic meals. And it’s gonna be cheaper than going out to one of those restaurants.

Female student

Much cheaper actually . . .

Male student

So, you know, it’ll be worth it. The meals will be as good as the ones in those expensive restaurants.

Narrator

The man expresses his opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state his opinion about the plan and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.


My speaking transcript:

University try to implement one new policy that, University dining hall will be converted into Campus Dining Hall, for one week at the end of the semester it will serve special meal for students that cook by other students who learn cooking class. and it costs more fee than usual.  it seems that the man agree with this policy because he knew someone who take the cooking class and it decent real experience for them and because this more pressure and no mistakes it can be good experience for them. and about the fee, the  man  stance that it  wood be cheaper than fancy restaurant out there


ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

Delivery (2.5/4):

The speaker's delivery is somewhat clear, with minor hesitations and mispronunciations, such as "wood" instead of "would." Their speech is understandable, but the pauses and hesitations can be distracting. Practice and fluency in delivery would improve this score.


Language Use (2.5/4):

The speaker utilizes a variety of vocabulary and some complex sentence structures, although there are noticeable errors in grammar and word choice. For instance, "it decent real experience for them" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The speaker's message is generally understandable, but the errors slightly detract from the overall clarity.


Topic Development (3/4):

The speaker successfully summarizes the plan and conveys the male student's opinion effectively. The reasons given for this opinion are adequately explained. The speaker's response could be more detailed and cohesive, however. The speaker might improve by further elaborating on the points made and linking them together more effectively. Overall, the speaker presents a logical argument and maintains focus on the topic.


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Track 36 Transcript:

Narrator

Read the passage about target marketing. You will have 45 seconds to read the passage. Begin reading now.


Reading Passage:

Target Marketing

Advertisers in the past have used radio and television in an attempt to provide information about their products to large, general audiences; it was once 

thought that the best way to sell a product was to advertise it to as many people 

as possible. However, more recent trends in advertising have turned toward 

target marketing. Target marketing is the strategy of advertising to smaller, very 

specific audiences—audiences that have been determined to have the greatest 

need or desire for the product being marketed. Target marketing has proved to 

be very effective in reaching potential customers



Track 37 Transcript:

Narrator

Now listen to part of a lecture on this topic in a marketing class.

Professor

Nowadays, something you notice more and more is television commercials that are made specifically for certain television programs. So, let’s say a company wants to sell a telephone . . . a cell phone. Now, during TV shows that young people watch— you know, shows with pop music or teen serials—they create a commercial that emphasizes how fun the phone is. You know, the phone has bright colors, and they show kids having a good time with their friends. And, well, the company wants the kids watching TV at this time to want to buy this phone—this phone that’s made especially for them. But, the same company will make a different commercial to be shown during, say, a program about business or a business news show. Now, for this group of people, businesspeople, the company will have to show how efficient their phone is, how it can handle all business easily and maybe even save money. And here’s the thing—it’s basically the same phone; the company has just made two different commercials to appeal to different groups of people.

Narrator

Using the professor’s examples, explain the advertising technique of target marketing.


My speaking transcript:

According to the reading passage, that Target marketing is a time to Target smaller and a narrow audience because of greatest need or desire to particular product instead of as many as possible people to reach.  after that in the professor elaborate more about this target marketing he said that for example TV show for children some company try to place the commercial on the TV show and on the other hand for business artificial the same company and the same product have different angle to promote about this cell phone.  Thus those are the target marketing examples


ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):


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Track 39 Transcript:

Narrator

Now listen to part of a lecture in a psychology class.

Professor

Why do we do the things we do? What drives us to participate in certain activities . . . to buy a certain car . . . or even to choose a certain career? In other words, what motivates us to do what we do?

Well, in studies of motivation, psychologists distinguish between two very different types. Our reasons for doing something, our motivations, can be extrinsic—in other words, based on some kind of external reward like praise or money . . . or they can be intrinsic . . . meaning we engage in the activity because it pleases us internally. Both create strong forces that lead us to behave in certain ways; however, intrinsic motivation is generally considered to be more long-lasting than the other.

As I said, extrinsic motivation is . . . external. It’s the desire to behave in a certain way in order to obtain some kind of external reward. A child, for example, who regularly does small jobs around the house does them not because she enjoys taking out the garbage or doing the dishes but because she knows if she does these things, she’ll be given a small amount of money for doing them. But how motivated would the child be to continue doing the work if her parents suddenly stopped giving her money for it?

With intrinsic, or internal, motivation we want to do something because we enjoy it, or get a sense of accomplishment from it. Most people who are internally motivated get pleasure from the activity . . . so they just feel good about doing it. For example, I go to the gym several times a week. I don’t go because I’m training for a marathon or anything. I just enjoy it. I have more energy after I exercise and I know it’s good for my health so it makes me feel good about myself. And that’s what’s kept me going there for the past five years.

Narrator

Using points and examples from the talk, explain the two types of motivation.


My speaking transcript:


According to the Professor there are two motivations theory the first one is external reward and the second one is    intrinsic motivation.  the professor gives one example about child that doing house job such as throwing garbage outside the house and if the child do it for joy it can be lasting longer and if the child doing it for just to get money from their parents it will be not doing it again if the parents not around.  moreover the professor give some personal example, he going to the gym for the past 5 years because he enjoyed it and give him energy and feeling good everyday so he kept doing it to the gym 


ChatGPT Assessment, based on TOEFL iBT rubrics in scale out of 4 for each rubric (Delivery, Language Use, Topic Development):

Delivery (3/4):

The speaker's delivery is generally clear, with only minor hesitations and pauses. The speech is easy to follow and understand. However, the natural rhythm and intonation could be improved to make the delivery more engaging.


Language Use (2.5/4):

The speaker uses a range of vocabulary and some complex sentences, but there are several grammar and word choice errors. For instance, "there are two motivations theory" should be "there are two theories of motivation," and "it will be not doing it again if the parents not around" is not grammatically correct. More accuracy in language use would enhance the speaker's performance.


Topic Development (3.5/4):

The speaker does a good job summarizing the two types of motivation and providing specific examples from the lecture. The response could be enhanced by more clearly delineating the concepts of extrinsic and intrinsic motivation and how they differ. However, the overall response is organized, maintains focus on the topic, and effectively communicates the main points from the lecture.





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