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TOEFL Speaking Practice #26

Task #1 - 1


The question:


Do you prefer to live in a big city or a small town?

My Answer:

For me that I have children that not on edge of school I would rather prefer to live in small cities. as simple as because living in small cities make us more socialized than in big cities as we know that human being is social creature that we need to interact to each other to increase our empathy to improve our emotional intelligence and so on. dad only can provide it in small cities in common. so maybe sometimes I will move to Big City because of school and education quality


ChatGPT Asessment:

Sure, I can assess your answer based on TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics. Here's my breakdown:

General Description (Score: 3 out of 4)

You addressed the prompt and provided a clear answer to the question.
You explained your preference for living in a small city.
However, you could have provided more specific details or examples to support your preference.
Delivery (Score: 3 out of 4)

You spoke clearly and audibly, with only a few minor hesitations.
You maintained a generally appropriate pace and intonation.
However, you could have varied your tone or emphasis more to add interest and emphasis to your points.
Language Use (Score: 3 out of 4)

You used a mix of simple and complex sentence structures and vocabulary.
You demonstrated some basic grammar and syntax accuracy.
However, there were a few errors in grammar, such as "dad only can provide it" instead of "that only can be provided" or "that can only be provided."
Topic Development (Score: 3 out of 4)

You presented some reasons for your preference for living in a small city, such as socialization and empathy.
However, you could have expanded on these points with more specific details or examples.
You also mentioned a possible exception to your preference, which adds some complexity to your answer.
Overall, your response is well-organized and demonstrates a reasonable level of language proficiency, but it could benefit from more specific details to support your points and some improvement in grammar accuracy.

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Task #1 - 2


The question:


Do you believe that technology is making our lives easier or more complicated?

My Answer:

In my opinion of course I believe that Technologies make our life much more easier than ever. for example the online meeting is really common nowadays that's really help me and all of my colleague and my stuff to meet each other all over the world instead of time and geography. in the in the past if you have to meet each other we have to spend a lot of money it's really costly that's no good compared to nowadays. so I believe technology is good for us

ChatGPT Asessment:

Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, here is the assessment of your answer:

General Description (Score: 3)

Your response addresses the prompt and provides a clear opinion on whether technology makes our lives easier or more complicated.
You support your opinion with a specific example of how technology has made your life easier.
However, your response lacks some specific details and elaboration.
Delivery (Score: 3)

Your delivery is clear and easy to understand.
Your pace is appropriate and you don't rush or hesitate excessively.
However, your tone and intonation are relatively flat, and you could benefit from adding more emphasis and expression to your speech.
Language Use (Score: 3)

Your language is generally accurate and appropriate to the situation.
You use some basic vocabulary and grammar structures correctly.
However, there are some errors in grammar and vocabulary, and you could benefit from more varied and sophisticated language use.
Topic Development (Score: 3)

You provide a clear main idea and supporting detail.
You give an example to support your idea, but the example lacks specific details and elaboration.
You could benefit from providing more supporting examples or details to fully develop your response.
Overall, your response is clear and understandable, but it could benefit from more specific details and elaboration, more varied and sophisticated language use, and more emphasis and expression in your delivery. Your overall score is 3 out of 4.
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Task #1 - 3


The question:


Do you think that it's important for children to learn a musical instrument?

My Answer:

In my own opinion I don't see that learning music instrument is important for kids or children or students. because for me myself I don't play music instrument I don't have a skill to play guitar piano and so on and I feel not so unlucky I just feel that I'm like other people and then I don't see any profound of people who learn instrument musical instruments than me. so in conclusion I couldn't see the benefits of learning music instrument especially for kids or children

ChatGPT Asessment:

Based on the TOEFL iBT Speaking Rubrics, here's an assessment of your answer's transcript:

General Description: 2

You provided a clear and direct response to the question.
However, your response lacks elaboration and details to support your main idea.
Delivery: 2

Your speech is generally clear and understandable.
However, there are a few instances of unclear or awkward phrasing, such as "not so unlucky" and "profound of people".
Your pace and rhythm are appropriate.
Language Use: 2

Your vocabulary is sufficient, but not varied or sophisticated.
Your grammar and syntax are generally correct, but there are a few errors, such as "I don't have a skill" (it should be "I don't have the skill").
Your pronunciation is mostly clear, but there are some minor issues with stress and intonation.
Topic Development: 1

You did not provide any specific examples or details to support your argument.
You did not address any counterarguments or alternative perspectives.
Overall, your score is 2+2+2+1 = 7 out of 16. To improve your score, you may want to:

Provide more details and examples to support your argument.
Use more varied and sophisticated vocabulary.
Pay attention to grammar and syntax to avoid errors.
Address potential counterarguments or alternative perspectives.

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Task #1 - 4


The question:


Do you agree that social media is a good way to stay connected with others?

My Answer:

For me social media is a good way to interact with each other but it is not the best way. why is the good way because social media nowadays is the most efficient tools for us to connect each other we can see each other all over the world instead of geographic and in time. but it is not the best because face to face meeting how to feel how to communicate each other fluidly is the most effective way to socialize for human being.

ChatGPT Asessment:

General Description: 3
The response addresses the prompt but lacks specificity and depth.

Delivery: 3
The delivery is generally clear and understandable, but there are some errors in pronunciation, intonation, and pacing that may hinder comprehension.

Language Use: 3
The language use is sufficient but with some inaccuracies and lack of complexity. The speaker shows some effort to use vocabulary related to the topic, but the use of grammar and vocabulary needs improvement.

Topic Development: 2
The response briefly addresses the prompt but lacks clear and coherent development of ideas. The speaker provides some reasons to support their opinion but does not provide enough specific examples or details to develop the argument.

Overall, the response shows some proficiency in speaking but needs improvement in several areas, such as providing more specific examples, using more complex language, and improving delivery. The overall score for this response is 2.75 out of 4.


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Task #1 - 5


The question:


Do you believe that celebrities have a responsibility to be good role models for young people?

My Answer:

For young people of course celebrity have to know their capability there are seen by everybody so they must be admit that they are role model for some people especially for young people. but for adult people a lot of people must be known that public figure only I'll figure that people knew it in famously. so I think public figure must be maintain their act to mean to keep that young people not doing wrong because of their practice

ChatGPT Asessment:

Thank you for providing your response to the question. Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, I would assess your answer as follows:

General Description (Score: 2)

Your response provides a somewhat relevant answer to the question but lacks clarity and coherence. You mentioned that celebrities have a responsibility to be good role models for young people and that they should maintain their actions to prevent young people from doing wrong. However, your response is not well-organized and some parts of it are difficult to understand.

Delivery (Score: 2)

Your delivery needs improvement. Your response lacks fluency and coherence, and you often pause and repeat yourself. You also use a limited range of vocabulary and make some errors in grammar and pronunciation. Your intonation and stress patterns are also inconsistent, which makes it difficult to follow your ideas.

Language Use (Score: 2)

Your language use is somewhat limited and contains some errors in grammar and vocabulary. You use simple sentence structures and some of your sentences are incomplete or unclear. You also make some errors in verb tense and subject-verb agreement. While you make some attempts to use vocabulary related to the topic, your range of vocabulary is limited.

Topic Development (Score: 2)

Your response provides a basic answer to the question but lacks development and coherence. You mention that celebrities have a responsibility to be good role models for young people, but you do not provide any supporting details or examples to illustrate your point. Your response is also somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear conclusion.

Overall, your response is understandable but needs improvement in all areas to meet the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics criteria. I suggest working on improving your delivery, grammar, and vocabulary to communicate your ideas more effectively and coherently. Additionally, try to provide more specific details and examples to develop your response and support your ideas.

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Task #1 - 6


The question:


Do you think that people should be allowed to own guns?

My Answer:

Owning guns I think no need for everybody because what the purpose of police if everybody have their own guns everybody have their own judgment to other people who do evil or not. because guns is really fatality if it's used we can see so many cases in the US that not adult people are mentality problem people using guns and make fertility to the source to the society so for me owning guns is not for everybody but only for several person 

ChatGPT Asessment:

Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, here's an assessment of your response:

General Description (Score: 3)
Your response provides a clear and concise answer to the question. You offer your opinion on whether people should be allowed to own guns and explain your reasoning.

Delivery (Score: 2)
While your response is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that make it difficult to follow at times. Your pace and intonation are generally appropriate, but there are a few instances where you stumble over your words.

Language Use (Score: 2)
There are several grammatical errors in your response, including subject-verb agreement errors and incorrect word usage ("fatality" instead of "fatal," "fertility" instead of "fatality"). Additionally, some of your phrasing is unclear and could be improved.

Topic Development (Score: 3)
Your response stays on topic and provides a clear explanation of your opinion on the issue. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific examples or evidence to support your argument.

Overall, your response demonstrates a good understanding of the topic and presents a clear argument. However, there are areas where your language use and delivery could be improved. Your score for this response would be a 2.5 out of 4.


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Task #1 - 7


The question:


Do you think that the government should do more to address climate change?

My Answer:

In my opinion it's really it depends on what country you are. my country is Indonesia I think we no need to care a lot to climate change because you are developed country we are third country that just really started to develop our country to better future, if we follow the code of climate change it can be a slower of our developing. so in my opinion climate change is not need to follow by my government

ChatGPT Asessment:

Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, here's an assessment of your answer's transcript:

General Description: 2/4
Your response is partially relevant to the question. You have expressed your opinion, but it lacks specificity and fails to address the issue of whether the government should do more to address climate change. Additionally, the organization of your response is unclear, making it difficult to follow your argument.

Delivery: 3/4
Your delivery is generally clear and understandable, although there are some errors in grammar and pronunciation that may cause confusion for the listener.

Language Use: 2/4
While you have demonstrated some basic vocabulary and sentence structures, your response is not well-developed, and there are several grammatical errors and imprecise word choices. You also lack appropriate transitions between ideas, which affects the coherence of your response.

Topic Development: 1/4
Your response lacks adequate development and does not provide sufficient supporting details or examples to support your argument. You have also failed to address the key points of the question, which negatively impacts your score in this category.

Overall, your response earns a score of 2/4 in General Description, 3/4 in Delivery, 2/4 in Language Use, and 1/4 in Topic Development.

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Task #1 - 8


The question:


Do you agree that college education is necessary to succeed in life?

My Answer:

Absolutely I agree that college life are attending college is good for students life in the future. because it's just like a final stage of adolescence that just right before the real life, so in college students learn how to manage their own money how to learn their own study how to learn to interact with other people and so on. so in my opinion people who want to get the brighter future must be attending college

ChatGPT Asessment:

General Description: 3/4

The answer is clear and focused, with a main idea that is well-supported.
The speaker offers a clear opinion on the topic.
Delivery: 3/4

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and intelligible.
The speaker's pacing and intonation are adequate.
There are some minor errors in pronunciation and grammar, but they do not significantly impede communication.
Language Use: 2/4

There are some noticeable grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that detract from the overall fluency of the answer.
Vocabulary is generally adequate, but could be more varied and precise.
Topic Development: 3/4

The speaker offers several supporting reasons for their opinion.
There is a good attempt to connect ideas with transitional language.
The development of ideas could be more detailed, and there is some repetition.
Overall, the answer shows good potential, but there is room for improvement in terms of language use and development of ideas.


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Task #1 - 9


The question:


Do you think that it's important to learn a second language?

My Answer:

Because of technology I think in the future learning second language is not really important. because people can easily translate their own language into other language by maybe a small of device that's really convenient. even if nowadays this tools never be found yet but I believe in the future it can easily and it can found it everywhere. but however I think for people who do academic or formal bilateral connection it must be learned the second language because of their purposes

ChatGPT Asessment:

General Description: 3/4
Delivery: 2/4
Language Use: 2/4
Topic Development: 2/4

Overall score: 2.25/4

Assessment:

General Description:
Your answer generally addressed the question, and you provided a clear stance on the topic. However, you could have provided more details and elaborated on your points.

Delivery:
Your delivery was somewhat unclear and lacked fluency. You also had some hesitation and errors in grammar, which affected the overall coherence and coherence of your response.

Language Use:
Your language use was somewhat limited and you had some errors in grammar and vocabulary. You could have used more precise and varied language to express your ideas.

Topic Development:
Your response lacked development and detail. You provided only one main reason to support your argument and did not fully explain it. You could have provided more supporting examples and details to strengthen your argument.

Overall, your response could benefit from more development, clearer delivery, and stronger language use.

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Task #1 - 10


The question:


Do you believe that animals should be kept in zoos for public entertainment?

My Answer:

I will say that I agree that anymore some animal must be kept in Zoo in terms of entertaining people. because people need entertainment obviously and then moreover than that kids or children really loves animals for their learning face and then it's his mark really common that parents teaching their children about animals. so in terms of entertain and learning I agree that animals must be kept in Zoo

ChatGPT Asessment:

Sure, I can help you with that! Based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics, here is my assessment of your answer's transcript:

General Description (3/4):
Your answer is relevant to the question, and you have a clear stance. However, you could have provided more details to support your opinion.

Delivery (3/4):
You speak at a moderate pace with a clear and understandable pronunciation. However, you could have varied your intonation and stress to make your answer more engaging.

Language Use (2/4):
You use simple vocabulary and sentence structures, and some of your grammar is incorrect. For example, "anymore some animal" should be "some animals," and "it's his mark really common" should be "it's really common." Additionally, you have some awkward phrasing, such as "then moreover than that."

Topic Development (2/4):
You provide a clear stance but don't elaborate on it with specific examples or details. Additionally, your answer lacks coherence and organization. You could have structured your answer better, for example, by introducing your stance in the beginning and providing supporting details in the following sentences.

Overall, I would rate your answer's transcript as 2.5 out of 4 based on the TOEFL iBT speaking rubrics. To improve your score, focus on improving your language use and topic development. You can do this by practicing more complex sentence structures and providing specific examples to support your opinions. Additionally, try to structure your answers in a clear and organized manner. Good luck with your TOEFL iBT speaking practice!

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